Case study: improving user instructions

Users need clear, unambiguous instructions to be able to perform their tasks safely and effectively.

This case study compares an original text that a client supplied to us with a modified version that we created. (For this case study, we have change our text slightly.)

What we found

Our investigation of the tasks that users perform showed that:

Additionally, the original text has these faults:

Client's original text

Stocktaking Step By Step

The Stock Take is now complete.

What we did

Our modified text is an example of how the procedures could be presented to users. Notice in particular how:

Our modified text

Stocktaking at Head Office

[In practice, other information about the overall stocktaking process would go here.]

To stocktake when there are many shops

  1. Enter and update all sales, purchase invoices and distributions to the night before the start of the physical counting of stock. See page x.
  2. Freeze the stocktake file using
    STKFRZ
    (page x). Typically, you would do this one or two days after the physical counting started.
  3. Perform a daily backup (page x).
  4. Use the computer system as normal. Process all sales and purchases of new stock. However, to prevent any possible confusion, we recommend that any new stock is not put into the shops until after the stocktake is complete.
  5. When the Stock Check Report or the scanners are returned from the shop, process the stocktaking results (next procedure).

To process the stocktaking results

  1. When the shop returns the Stock Check Report or the scanners, enter the results from the Stock Check Reports and then print a Discrepancy Report using
    DSCREP
    (page x).
  2. Send the Discrepancy Report to management to investigate and report back.
  3. When the report is returned, do one of these:
    • Make any corrections using
      STKCRR
      (page x) according to the instructions you receive from management. For each branch for which you made corrections, print another Discrepancy Report, and return it to the branch. Repeat as necessary.
    • Once management is happy that all outstanding discrepancies are valid, update the stocktake figures and produce a final stock valuation using
      STKFIN
      (page x).
  4. The stocktake is now complete.

Stocktaking at Each Shop

We recommend that you:

To manually count stock at a shop

  1. When you receive the Stock Check Report (page x) from Head Office, you can begin the stocktake.
  2. Identify each stock item in the shop and put a tick against the relevant entry on the Stock Check Report. Note the following:
    • Any sales made after the stocktake has started must be counted as in stock.
    • Stock items that are on deposit must be counted as in stock.
    • Stock items that are transferred out of the branch after the stocktake started must be counted as in stock at the branch.
    • If a stock item doesn't have a ticket (and the stock item is shown on the Stock Check Report), tick the entry in a different colour pen and hand write a ticket for the stock item.
    • If the stock item is not listed on the Stock Check Report, then:
      • On a separate sheet of paper, write the first 4 digits of the Stock Number (Department and Sub-Department), and as much information as you have for the description, price, cost, supplier and supplier reference. You may be able to find this information from brochures. If the stock item has a display label, you can find the price from this.
      • Write a stock ticket with the first 4 digits of the Stock Number, attach it to the stock item, and put the stock item aside, so that it can be correctly ticketed later.
  3. Add up the ticks for each stock item and write the total on the Stock Check Report.
  4. Compare the deposit report this is available from the till against the outstanding deposits, and make corrections if appropriate. Liaise with Head Office staff to verify the corrected deposit reports against the Head Office system.
  5. Send the completed Stock Check Report back to Head Office.
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