Improve Your Global Business English: a review

Review by Mike Unwalla.

Fiona Talbot and Sudakshina Bhattacharjee, 2012. Improve Your Global Business English. London: Kogan Page. 238 pages. ISBN 978-0-7494-6613-8.

"The purpose of this book is to help you grow your understanding and use of English in the global context of things and be aware of the cultural, social, and professional environments of your readers, customers, or target audience - so that you can speak, interact and write clearly, comprehensively and successfully."

Improve Your Global Business English contains many interesting facts and gives some useful advice. However, the content is badly organized and the guidelines for global English are not sufficient.

The book is badly organized

The first 3 chapters are about topics such as defining the audience, a history of English, definitions of the terms that are in the book, and the use of style guides.

Chapter 4 is 'Common challenges in business English in a global workplace'. For example, the authors explain that although colour can be useful, the meaning of a colour is dependent on culture. In Europe, when some persons think about the black, they think about funerals. In India, when some persons think about white, they think about funerals.

Although the content of chapter 4 is good, the section 'Presentations should always showcase your talent' is not in a good location. What is special about presentations such that the topic is in this chapter? Chapter 5 is 'How does writing in a global economy affect us all?', but most of the chapter is about how to write letters. Other types of document are discussed in separate chapters:

The opposite problem is that each chapter that is about a specified type of document contains general information, as these examples show:

A better way to structure the book is to have 2 sections. The first section can be about English. The second section can be about the special problems of the different types of documents.

An index can help to solve the problem of bad organization of the content. But, the book does not have an index.

The guidelines for global English are not sufficient

The authors use the terms standard English and global English to mean the same thing:

Standard English that is taught in schools in the UK and in the US is not optimized for global audiences. Standard English causes many problems for international readers. For example, multi-word verbs are a large problem for international readers. "English that displays the least regional variation" is good, but it is not sufficient for global audiences.

Frequently, the guidelines are too general to be useful. For example, the section 'Defining global business English within your organization' mentions that a consistent style is important. I agree. But, the writers do not give clear guidelines about what to do and what not to do. The image that follows shows the 'Checklist of things to consider'.

Checklist of things to consider

To tell readers to 'consider something' does not help those readers. To be useful, guidelines must tell people what to do, or what not to do.

The last page of the chapter is a template for a style guide. A 1-page style guide cannot contain all the necessary information. Typically, a style guide has many hundreds of pages, as these examples show:

As an overview that shows the typical content of a style guide, the page is satisfactory. As a template, the page is not satisfactory. One way to make the template more useful is to include cross-references to other parts of Improve Your Global Business English and to other style guides.

Sometimes, the text in Improve Your Global Business English is contradictory. A task cannot be 'demanding' and 'have no short cuts to quality' and at the same time have 'virtually no cost':

The title of the book is Improve Your Global Business English. Therefore, I expected a book that is about the problems of writing for a global audience. Improve Your Global Business English does not contain sufficient information about that topic.

See also

Articles about language

Reviews of books that are about English for international readers

International English pages on the TechScribe website

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